The Things She Carries

evemerb Uncategorized September 12, 2018 1 Minute

The things she carries in her deep slumber

The happiness and joy of pushing away

The suffering in the real world

As she wishes she becomes successful

After college and having a beautiful family

The things she carries in reality

The sadness and the ache

The depression and anger

Having no success and a broken family

The things she carries

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Just an average girl. That lives in a small town that barely anyone knows about, doing this for a grade. :) View all posts by evemerb

Published September 12, 2018

Brittany Stoltzfus says:

September 14, 2018 at 1:32 am

Eve, this is beautiful! If I was the emotional type I would be crying for you right now. Praying for you!

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student21103057 says:

September 14, 2018 at 4:30 pm

Eve, Well done!
I feel like your first line holds a lot of depth and meaning.
What are more things you carry that are physical?

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Danielle Beiler says:

September 17, 2018 at 8:44 pm

I like the repetition in the last line. But I too wonder what other physical things you carry that represent those deep hidden things….

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christianlignore says:

September 18, 2018 at 8:05 pm

This is good but maybe more things you can actually carry.

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